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mardock


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Join date : 2012-02-28

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PostSubject: Mardock the Saiyajin   Mardock the Saiyajin Icon_minitimeTue Feb 28, 2012 10:30 am

Name: Mardock
Alias:/
Age: 18
Height: 182 cm
Weight: 83 kg
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Black

Appearance: Mardock usually wears his school uniform, but when he is not in school he wears causal black pants, his old bloody red hight tops and a black day coat. What makes Mardock a little different from the others is his cherokee hairstyle. He has a tribal tatoo representing a Indian tribe from where his mother is from, and on hes chest he has a a a giant S tattooed that represents his saiyan grandfather Stavordock.

Personality: From the beginning Mardock was a troublesome boy, but from the start he liked martial arts and fighting. He is smart and reliable , but in some situations he is very irresponsible. From his fathers side ,who is a saiyan Mardock has a great thirst for power and for combat.

History: Mardock was born on planet Earth as an only child to his middle/class saiyan father and Indian mother. From the start hes father tried to keep hes saiyan blood a secret from Mardock so he cut off his tail while he was just a baby. But when Mardock started going to school he noticed that he has a strange power inside of him, and eventually hes father had to tell him who he really is. Mardock is very proud of his saiyan blood although hes father doesent approve it, that is why Mardock always had to train alone and learn techniques from various masters.

Home Planet: Earth
Alignment: Bad
Race: Half/Saiyan
Aura Colour: Blue
Unique Trait: /
Techniques: Level 1: Kamehameha, Mouth energy wave,Eye laser and Destructo Disc
Level 2: Final Flash, Explosive wave and Flame Kamehameha
Level 3: Super Kamehameha



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Elixar Takoyaiba

Elixar Takoyaiba


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Join date : 2012-01-13

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PostSubject: Re: Mardock the Saiyajin   Mardock the Saiyajin Icon_minitimeThu Mar 01, 2012 7:36 pm

Just a little suggestion while you wait: Add more to personality, appearance and more specifically history, let your creative juices flow and give him a real nice background, something interesting, also you spelt a few things wrong, try running things through with a spell checker. =D
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Izumi

Izumi


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Join date : 2012-01-02
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PostSubject: Re: Mardock the Saiyajin   Mardock the Saiyajin Icon_minitimeMon Mar 12, 2012 4:44 am

Also might want to review some previously approved apps for a Unique Trait idea.
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